What does the rabbi think about this song?

Peace and blessings
Although the rabbi is not known as a poet, I would love to know what you think of the poem.
Regards
A.I.A.

"Balloon Generation"
Weeping over the bitter exile, over a cup of cold tea, over an injured snail, over a delicious cake, over the act of Genesis and the chariot, over why they weren't asked when they created, over not wanting to lose a hair, over wanting to live in wealth without any worries, over and over again